--Apple-Mail=_923D8CF5-9B2B-434B-9E43-7F867B28C198 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Just a couple of typo things which she will probably correct anyway: Article 1 Par 4 Second sentence=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9DQuebeckers=E2=80=9D? Second to last par, second sentence=E2=80=A6.=E2=80=9DThey = they=E2=80=99ll=E2=80=9D=E2=80=A6. Article 2 Second section Tim, sentence 6=E2=80=A6.=E2=80=9DThat will definitely = expand the (?) on=E2=80=A6..=E2=80=9D That=E2=80=99s it. Tim Thomas Home Care Assistance (Montr=C3=A9al) Tel: 514.907.5065 tthomas@homecareassistance.com | = Homecareassistancemontreal.ca = > On Mar 3, 2021, at 8:33 AM, Timothy Thomas = wrote: >=20 > Please take a look when you can >=20 > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: Amanda Olliver > > Date: Fri, Feb 26, 2021 at 2:19 PM > Subject: Ready: March content for review by Thursday, March 4 > To: Timothy Thomas >, Tim Thomas = >, Sandra Daoust = > >=20 >=20 > Hi everyone, happy Friday! >=20 > =20 >=20 > I=E2=80=99m happy to attach the draft content for your feedback. = Welcome your thoughts! >=20 > =20 >=20 > What the vaccine means to seniors/what to do next: This is truly a = human interest piece bolstered by advice that I think gives you a = personal voice this month. It=E2=80=99s different, and a smart way to = connect on another level. > Demystifying funding for seniors home care: This speaks to the = business side of things, and shows your value/differentiators by subtly = reinforcing what you guys do really, really well and how you ease the = burden (i.e. you get what you pay for). That said, this all comes from = me interpreting the radio commercial and doing some brainstorming on my = own so by all means: tell me what=E2=80=99s missing! It=E2=80=99s meant = as something you can edit and flesh out. If there are other points to = make let=E2=80=99s definitely add them in. > =20 >=20 > Looking forward to hearing your thoughts, everyone! >=20 > =20 >=20 > I will be away for the next two weeks but will check back at the end = of next week to gather your edits, and turn this over to translation. >=20 > =20 >=20 > If you can take a look by then, that would be fab. >=20 > Thanks, as always, for the opportunity to team on this. >=20 > Have a great weekend and enjoy the sunshine today, > Amanda >=20 > =20 >=20 > =20 >=20 > Amanda Olliver >=20 > Founder & Storyteller-in-Chief >=20 > The Hudson Office > 514-701-3242 >=20 > amanda@hudsonoffice.ca > =20 >=20 >=20 >=20 > --=20 > =20 > Timothy Thomas = = > Regional Director of Operations > Tel: 514.907.5065 | Fax: 514.221.4265 > tt@homecareassistance.com | = Homecareassistancemontreal.ca = >=20 > --Apple-Mail=_923D8CF5-9B2B-434B-9E43-7F867B28C198 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Just = a couple of typo things which she will probably correct anyway: Article 1 Par 4 Second sentence=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9DQuebeckers=E2=80=9D? Second to last par, second sentence