Re: Montreal Postcard Mock

From
Greg Jones <greg.jones@thekey.com>
To
Joey Taylor <joey.taylor@thekey.com>
CC
Timothy Thomas <tt@thekey.com>, KATY KESSLER <katy.kessler@thekey.com>, Emma Zumsen <emma.zumsen@thekey.com>
Date
Tue, 19 Nov 2024 14:23:17 -0600
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INBOX
--0000000000005c6b69062749ce52 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hey Joey, We just hung up with Tim and collected all of your feedback. Tim also shared an example collateral from Calgary that he is going to send to us for headline guidance. We will use that and the notes/feedback to send to our creative resource for edits and revisions. Once sent, we will reach back out with timelines for a 2nd round of review. Please feel free to reach out if you have any questions or concerns you might have in the meantime. Best, Greg On Tue, Nov 19, 2024 at 2:17=E2=80=AFPM Joey Taylor wrote: > Hey, > > Sorry just saw this, I had a conflicting meeting that just ended. Did you > have a chance to meet? > If not, I am free now!! > > Let me know, > > On Tue, Nov 19, 2024 at 2:38=E2=80=AFPM Greg Jones wrote: > >> I will grab time at 2p. @Joey Taylor - Let me >> know if that won't work. >> >> Talk soon, team. >> >> Best, >> >> Greg >> >> On Tue, Nov 19, 2024 at 1:24=E2=80=AFPM Timothy Thomas w= rote: >> >>> Today at 2p CST works for me. >>> >>> On Tue, Nov 19, 2024 at 2:11=E2=80=AFPM Greg Jones >>> wrote: >>> >>>> Absolutely! Below are avails to connect: >>>> >>>> Today: 2p-4p CST >>>> Wednesday: 11a-2p CST >>>> Thursday: 23p-4p CST >>>> >>>> Let us know if there is a window in there that works for you and we >>>> will block tim. >>>> >>>> Thanks, Joey. >>>> >>>> Best, >>>> >>>> Greg >>>> >>>> On Tue, Nov 19, 2024 at 12:46=E2=80=AFPM Joey Taylor >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hey Greg, Would you be free to meet this week to go over everything, >>>>> we had a few changes but would be easier to discuss in meeting. Let m= e know >>>>> what works best, >>>>> >>>>> On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 9:04=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Thanks Greg. >>>>>> >>>>>> Joey and I will review and get back to you shortly. >>>>>> >>>>>> On Fri, Nov 15, 2024 at 3:58=E2=80=AFPM Greg Jones >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> Hey Team, >>>>>>> A little bit ahead of schedule but here is the mock up of the >>>>>>> postcard in support of the Montreal DM campaign. There were some qu= estions >>>>>>> that we had and some points that we would love your input on, namel= y: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Questions - >>>>>>> - the website (I'm guessing it's TheKey.ca?) >>>>>>> - phone number (the old mailer used (514) 907-5065, is that still >>>>>>> accurate?) >>>>>>> - an email contact >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Areas for Input - >>>>>>> -We think we should cut down the amount of copy in the headline and >>>>>>> subhead-- it's pretty long, and the subhead repeats some informatio= n. Maybe >>>>>>> we can rework the existing headline into a headline and subheader? >>>>>>> - The bullet points on the back side are a bit wordy, and the two >>>>>>> sections have some similar points. We'd recommend that we combine s= ome of >>>>>>> those bullet points to make one section to improve readability. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Let us know what you think when you have a minute. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Best, >>>>

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