--0000000000006360a80627487332 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hey Greg, Would you be free to meet this week to go over everything, we had a few changes but would be easier to discuss in meeting. Let me know what works best, On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 9:04=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrot= e: > Thanks Greg. > > Joey and I will review and get back to you shortly. > > On Fri, Nov 15, 2024 at 3:58=E2=80=AFPM Greg Jones wrote: > >> Hey Team, >> A little bit ahead of schedule but here is the mock up of the >> postcard in support of the Montreal DM campaign. There were some questio= ns >> that we had and some points that we would love your input on, namely: >> >> Questions - >> - the website (I'm guessing it's TheKey.ca?) >> - phone number (the old mailer used (514) 907-5065, is that still >> accurate?) >> - an email contact >> >> Areas for Input - >> -We think we should cut down the amount of copy in the headline and >> subhead-- it's pretty long, and the subhead repeats some information. Ma= ybe >> we can rework the existing headline into a headline and subheader? >> - The bullet points on the back side are a bit wordy, and the two >> sections have some similar points. We'd recommend that we combine some o= f >> those bullet points to make one section to improve readability. >> >> Let us know what you think when you have a minute. >> >> Best, >> >> Greg >> >> >> -- >> >> *Greg Jones* >> Sr. Director, Paid Media Strategy | *TheKey* >> Mobile: 801-671-6754 >> [image: TheKey] >> > --=20 Joey Taylor *Directeur G=C3=A9n=C3=A9ral/**General Manager* 514-907-5065 TheKey.ca [image: TheKey] --0000000000006360a80627487332 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hey Greg,=20 Would you be free to meet this week to go over everything, we had a few cha= nges but would be easier to discuss in meeting. Let me know what works best,=20 On Mon, Nov 18, 2024 at 9:04=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas < tt@thekey.com > wrote: Thanks Greg.=C2=A0 Joey and I will review and get back to you shortly. On Fri, Nov 15, 2024 at 3:58=E2=80=AFPM Greg Jones < greg.jones@thekey.com > wrote= : Hey Team, =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0A little bit ahead of sched= ule but here is the mock up of the postcard in support of the Montreal DM c= ampaign. There were some questions that we had and some points that we woul= d love your input on, namely: Questions -=C2=A0 - the website (I'm guessing it's TheKey.ca?) - phone number (the old mailer used (514) 907-5065, is that still accurate= ?) - an email contact Areas for Input -= =C2=A0 -We=C2=A0think we should cut down the amount of copy in th= e headline and subhead-- it's pretty long, and the subhead repeats some= information. Maybe we can rework the existing headline into a headline and= subheader? - The bullet points on the back side are a bit wordy,= and the two sections have some similar points. We'd recommend that we = combine some of tho