This is a multipart message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_0027_01D4623B.2A5B8360 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_001_0028_01D4623B.2A5B8360" ------=_NextPart_001_0028_01D4623B.2A5B8360 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable The looseness of the sentence structure is to capture the conversational = tone. Louise and I had this discussion =E2=80=93 if we start editing for = structure, it will turn into a regular blog IMO. Your call though.=20 =20 In regards to the edits you identified, I agree 100%. :( =20 =20 Mark Dickie | Partner, Digital Marketer m: 613-608-9646 o: 613-692-0345 e: mark@20eight.ca www.20eight.ca = = =20 =20 =20 From: Timothy Thomas =20 Sent: October 12, 2018 2:28 PM To: Mark Dickie Subject: Fwd: Xerox Scan =20 Here are our changes to the article. We'll make them so don't worry = about justing the text. =20 I'm a just a bit concerned with the wording of several sentences, for = example:=20 =20 "When his memory loss started going..."=20 =20 There seems to be some issues with sentence structure. Is that due to = the interviewer? or is that Cheryl's writing style? =20 Thanks Timothy =20 ---------- Forwarded message --------- From: > Date: Fri, Oct 12, 2018 at 10:49 AM Subject: Xerox Scan To: >, > Please open the scanned attachment Number of Images: 6 Attachment File Type: PDF Device Name: VersaLink C605 Device Location:=20 =20 --=20 Timothy Thomas Director of Client Care & Development =20 = =20 =20 Home Care Assistance (Montr=C3=A9al) Inc. 4464 Ste. Catherine Ouest Westmount, Qu=C3=A9bec H3Z 1R7 Tel: 514 907 5065 - Fax: 514 907 5067=20 tt@homecareassistance.com =20 = = =20 ------=_NextPart_001_0028_01D4623B.2A5B8360 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable v\:* {behavior:url(#default#VML);} o\:* {behavior:url(#default#VML);} w\:* {behavior:url(#default#VML);} .shape {behavior:url(#default#VML);}