--000000000000d5f21e061455f939 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="000000000000d5f21c061455f938" --000000000000d5f21c061455f938 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Here are two options that are a darn sight better than what they came up with - which was essentially: =E2=80=98we=E2=80=99ll help you with AHS pape= rwork=E2=80=99. *Fun! Excite me by talking to me about doing government paperwork!* And their suggestion was too long anyway. 1. Take advantage of this benefit to live longer and joyfully in your own, cherished home. Or 2. Let us, at The Key, help you live longer and joyfully, in your own, cherished home. Here's how they sit in the ad: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GynfYN7eELos2IXOBPz-YT9ikdwlc0F4q_uzef3= tp-U/edit?usp=3Dsharing I realize the above is *slightly* repetitive - but reinforcement IMO is more important than coming up with 'something else' to cram into 30 seconds - *we do this and that and don't forget about this too! *Argh I hate that. Do we get a credit from these guys for doing their job for them? They definitely factored in time/cost for writing and completely flubbed it. So when they want to talk about dayparts and cranking rates, maybe we point this out? Ray On Fri, Mar 22, 2024 at 6:25=E2=80=AFPM Ray Smale wr= ote: > Thanks for the context. > Alright - let's think over the weekend if we have anything more potent > that we want to put in there instead. > > On Fri, Mar 22, 2024 at 6:21=E2=80=AFPM Chuck Terlesky > wrote: > >> AHS=E2=80=94Alberta Health Services=E2=80=94is a common acronym for our = province's public >> health care system. AHS has to approve hours, and then the client can pi= ck >> our services. So it does make sense to say that=E2=80=94I'm not sure if = we needed >> to say that over something else. >> >> On Fri, Mar 22, 2024 at 4:13=E2=80=AFPM Ray Smale = wrote: >> >>> Looks like their contribution was: >>> >>> *We=E2=80=99ll also help you through the AHS approval process so you ca= n access >>> coverage for the services you need.* >>> >>> You chaps will have to advise if that's the best use of those seconds >>> because I don't know what an AHS is and if that's an important thing vs= . >>> anything else we could say in those precious seconds. >>> Ray >>> >>> On Fri, Mar 22, 2024 at 5:22=E2=80=AFPM Chuck Terlesky >>> wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Ray and Tim, >>>> >>>> Please see the revised script from Leon. Let me know if you have any >>>> questions, we can touch base on Monday. >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> Chuck >>>> >>>> ---------- Forwarded message --------- >>>> From: Leon Tansey >>>> Date: Fri, Mar 22, 2024 at 3:18=E2=80=AFPM >>>> Subject: REVISED Scripts >>>> To: cterlesky@thekey.com >>>> >>>> >>>> That=E2=80=99s right=E2=80=A6.scripts (plural). =F0=9F=98=8A Your= original was a little >>>> short=E2=80=A6so your writer had to massage things a bit. See attache= d. >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> The writer kind of liked where the crew was going with this >>>> ide