--000000000000e62d3c06141afcec Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="000000000000e62d3b06141afceb" --000000000000e62d3b06141afceb Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Got it. The obvious problem with the alt suggestion is it's way too much for 30. Tactically, putting lines like these together makes for a painful listen: ...proud to offer... Client-Directed Home Care Program, designed for Alberta's seniors. With the Alberta Paid Client-Directed Home Care benefit... That's tough on the ears - besides being clunky it's gonna cause serious cognitive strain to stay engaged with it - like trying to read a disclaimer TBH. I'll work on something that talks to the listener more than 'at them' which I think both of these options are doing. When do you need it? Ray On Wed, Mar 20, 2024 at 12:42=E2=80=AFPM Timothy Thomas wro= te: > Hi Ray, > > The radio station provided us with a rough script. See attached. We're no= t > big fans of it and suggest something to this effect below. Let me know wh= at > you think: > > SFX: Soft, uplifting music in the background. > > Narrator: "At TheKey Calgary, we understand the value of comfortable, > independent living at home. That's why we're proud to offer our > Client-Directed Home Care Program, designed for Alberta's seniors." > > SFX: Sound of pages flipping. > > Narrator: "With the Alberta Paid Client-Directed Home Care benefit, enjoy > personalized home care services at no out-of-pocket costs, or choose > premium options at reduced rates. Our team is here to guide you through > every step, from determining eligibility to creating your care plan." > > SFX: Sound of a door opening, implying welcoming. > > Narrator: "Experience concierge customer service and direct billing to > Alberta Blue Cross. Let TheKey unlock the door to quality home care and > peace of mind." > > SFX: Soft chime. > > Narrator: "Call us at 403-301-3777 or visit thekey.ca/calgary/cdhc to > learn more. TheKey Calgary, your partner in exceptional home care." > > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: Chuck Terlesky > Date: Wed, Mar 20, 2024 at 12:36=E2=80=AFPM > Subject: Fwd: Script for Approval > To: Timothy Thomas > > > > > ---------- Forwarded message --------- > From: Leon Tansey > Date: Tue, Mar 19, 2024 at 4:04=E2=80=AFPM > Subject: Script for Approval > To: cterlesky@thekey.com > > > Hi Chuck, Happy Tuesday! Please find attached a script idea for you to > consider. Look it over, think it over, and then give me a call in the > morning to discuss further. Normally, I would say call me=E2=80=A6except= =E2=80=A6.I want > to make sure it hits on the point(s) you are trying to stress. If not,= I > may have an idea. > > > > Let=E2=80=99s talk tomorrow. Thanks! > > > > P.S. Oh, your booking is in our system. I will send you a copy of the > order when I get a sec. Did your accounting people find a =E2=80=9Cno r= eply=E2=80=9D > email from our Media E-Bill system? And, you were going to s