Calgary card

From
Ray Smale <ray.smale@thekey.com>
To
Pamela Alegria <pamela.alegria@thekey.com>, Timothy Thomas <tt@thekey.com>
Date
Thu, 20 Jun 2024 22:30:42 -0600
Folder
INBOX
--00000000000094e657061b5ee587 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Tim, Pam will share the card draft. I think it=E2=80=99s good. The edits I have are: There are too many words in the green circle. We want what is in there to pop! And it should something like: Alberta Health makes our in-home care almost free for you! Or Alberta=E2=80=99s Health Benefit makes the service almost free for you. Also need to solve that the copy on the right gets you to: Claim your benefit before you know there is one. So: Something like: All Alberta seniors are eligible for the Province=E2=80=99s in-home care be= nefit. Finally I might leave out the =E2=80=98let us help you live joyfully=E2=80= =A6.=E2=80=99 Since there=E2=80=99s enough on that side. One thing to consider though is putting that at the bottom of the front side. Finally again: There=E2=80=99s no space for the address so let=E2=80=99s put that on the f= ront side. Could you confirm area required? Last: the dancing couple may not be ideal. If you don=E2=80=99t like it, we= can provide alts. I=E2=80=99m on vacation so can I let you two work together to get this over= the line? Ray --00000000000094e657061b5ee587 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Tim,=C2=A0 Pam will share the card draft. I think it=E2=80=99s good. The edits I hav= e are: There are too many words in the green circle.= We want what is in there to pop! And it should something like: Alberta Health makes our in-home care almost free for you! = Or Alb= erta=E2=80=99s Health Benefit makes the service almost free for you. Also need to solve that the co= py on the right gets you to: Claim your benefit befo= re you know there is one. So: Something like: All Alb= erta seniors are eligible for the Province=E2=80=99s in-home care benefit. Finally I might leave ou= t the =E2=80=98let us help you live joyfully=E2=80=A6.=E2=80=99 Since there=E2=80=99s enough on tha= t side. One thing to consider though is putting that= at the bottom of the front side. Finally again: There=E2=80=99s no space fo= r the address so let=E2=80=99s put that on the front side. Could you confir= m area required? Last: t= he dancing couple may not be ideal. If you don=E2=80=99t like it, we can pr= ovide alts. I=E2=80=99m = on vacation so can I let you two work together to get this over the line? Ray --00000000000094e657061b5ee587--

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