Re: Direct Mail Copy

From
Megan Heinen <mheinen@thekey.com>
To
Timothy Thomas <tt@thekey.com>
CC
Chuck Terlesky <cterlesky@thekey.com>
Date
Wed, 8 Nov 2023 12:56:24 -0800
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--00000000000024aa440609aa54c0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Question. As I am in here editing, do you think a postcard makes sense - or a more formal form letter? We don't want to do anything fishy, but I wonder if a letter will allow us to put more detail, but also give the impression we are more of an official solution. What do you think? On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 10:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrot= e: > Sounds good, thank you. > > On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 12:59=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen = wrote: > >> This is really good and I have a few suggestions. This copy is probably >> better suited for the landing page, as it's simply TOO much for a >> direct mail piece. Let take a stab and get back to you guys. >> >> On Tue, Nov 7, 2023 at 8:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wr= ote: >> >>> Hi Megan, >>> >>> Chuck and I polished the direct mail piece copy, take a look and let me >>> know what you think - >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bdop24rs-ZZOUU4ulGf1= Z3vZYpWg/edit?usp=3Dsharing >>> >>> Thanks! >>> >>> -- >>> Tim Thomas >>> Head of Canada Division >>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>> tt@TheKey.com >>> (514) 591-9387 >>> TheKey.ca >>> [image: TheKey] >>> >> > > -- > Tim Thomas > Head of Canada Division > *Please note my email has changed:* > tt@TheKey.com > (514) 591-9387 > TheKey.ca > [image: TheKey] > --00000000000024aa440609aa54c0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Question. As I am in here editing, do you think a postcard= makes sense - or a more formal form letter? We don&#39;t want to do anythi= ng fishy, but I wonder if a letter will allow us to put more detail, but al= so give the impression we are more of an official solution. What do you thi= nk? On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 10:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas &lt; tt@thekey.com &gt; wrote: Sounds good, thank you. On= Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 12:59=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen &lt; mheinen@thekey.com &gt; wrote: This= is really good and I have a few suggestions. This copy is probably better = suited=C2=A0for the landing page, as it&#39;s simply TOO much for a direct= =C2=A0mail piece. Let take a stab and get back to you guys.=C2=A0 = On Tue, No= v 7, 2023 at 8:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas &lt; tt@thekey.com &gt; wrote: Hi Megan, Chuck and I polished the direct mail piece copy, take a look and=C2= =A0let me know what you think -=C2=A0=C2=A0 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bd= op24rs-ZZOUU4ulGf1Z3vZYpWg/edit?usp=3Dsharing = Thanks! -- = Tim Thomas = Head of Canada Division Please note my email has changed: <a href=3D"ma= ilto:tt@thekey.com" title=3D"Create n

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