Re: Next Canada blog: cheque-emploi service outline review

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Megan Heinen <mheinen@thekey.com>
To
Kira Farnham <kira.farnham@thekey.com>
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Timothy Thomas <tt@thekey.com>, Joey Taylor <joey.taylor@thekey.com>, Phil Chanda <phil.chanda@thekey.com>
Date
Thu, 18 Apr 2024 09:29:11 -0700
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--000000000000c5ae1c0616617a22 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Looks good on my end. My only feedback is to make sure the writer emphasizes that our team is there to support the whole process of receiving the gov benefit (assuming that is true). That is our major value prop in addition to the care itself, in my opinion. On Thu, Apr 18, 2024 at 8:30=E2=80=AFAM Kira Farnham wrote: > @Phil Chanda and @Megan Heinen > did you have any feedback for this outline? > > > > On Tue, Apr 16, 2024 at 1:39=E2=80=AFPM Timothy Thomas wr= ote: > >> Oh that=E2=80=99s perfect as is then. Just wanted to make sure. Thanks >> >> Tim Thomas >> Head of Canada Division >> *Please note my email has changed:* >> tt@TheKey.com >> (514) 591-9387 >> TheKey.ca >> [image: TheKey] >> >> >> On Tue, Apr 16, 2024 at 4:38=E2=80=AFPM Kira Farnham >> wrote: >> >>> Thanks for your feedback, Tim. >>> >>> I chose "ch=C3=A8que emploi-service" as the primary keyword, so it will= be >>> included in the title and throughout the article. Did you mean as a >>> secondary keyword? >>> >>> On Tue, Apr 16, 2024 at 1:23=E2=80=AFPM Timothy Thomas = wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Kira, >>>> >>>> This looks great. One point to add. >>>> >>>> For the keywords, make sure the french name is included in the blog >>>> (ch=C3=A8que emploi-service). Even those searching in English will lik= ely use >>>> the french name. >>>> >>>> Thanks again! >>>> >>>> On Tue, Apr 16, 2024 at 2:04=E2=80=AFPM Kira Farnham >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hello all, >>>>> >>>>> I've organized an outline and researched some keywords for the >>>>> next blog on the Cheque-emploi service in Montreal. I would appreciat= e it >>>>> if you reviewed the outline >>>>> >>>>> to make sure the information is correct and the structure will work f= or the >>>>> article, as well as the keyword choices >>>>> before >>>>> I assign this to a writer. >>>>> >>>>> Your feedback helps make this process smoother and quicker for future >>>>> blogs, so I greatly appreciate it. Thank you! >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Best, >>>>> -- >>>>> Kira Farnham >>>>> >>>>> Marketing Intern @ TheKey >>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Tim Thomas >>>> Head of Canada Division >>>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>>> tt@TheKey.com >>>> (514) 591-9387 >>>> TheKey.ca >>>> [image: TheKey] >>>> >>> --000000000000c5ae1c0616617a22 Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Looks good on my end. My only feedback is to make sure the= writer=C2=A0emphasizes that our team is there to support the whole process= of receiving the gov benefit (assuming that is true). That is our major va= lue prop in addition to the care itself, in my=C2=A0opinion.=C2=A0 On Thu, A= pr 18, 2024 at 8:30=E2=80=AFAM Kira Farnham &lt; kira.farnham@thekey.com &gt; wrote: @Phil Chanda =C2=A0and=C2=A0 @Megan Heinen =C2=A0did you h= ave any feedback for this outline? On Tue,= Apr 16, 2024 at 1:39=E2=80=AFPM Timothy Thomas &lt; tt@thekey.com &gt

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