--001a1142c7129dbde4054aa29e00 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=001a1142c7129dbdde054aa29efe --001a1142c7129dbdde054aa29efe Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hello M=C3=A9lanie, Thank-you for the article. I can imagine this is not easy to write. (hence why I'm writing you in English :). Feel free to respond in French) It=E2=80=99s obviously a complicated subject with technical terms that are = not familiar to most readers. In fact, I found it difficult to understand myself and ended up referring to a government brochure to help. All to say that I think the article needs to be rewritten in a more simplified way in order to be understood and relevant to the reader. If you look at the government brochure attached, I think they are able to do this. In fact, you could probably use it as a basis. If you agree, would you be willing and have the time to rewrite the article? Alternately, I understand your on vacation so we could attempt a rewrite based in the government brochure and have you approve it upon your return. Please let me know=E2=80=A6thanks. --=20 *Timothy Thomas* *Client Care Manager* *Home Care Assistance (Montr**=C3=A9**al) Inc.* *4464 Ste. Catherine Ouest* *Westmount, Qu**=C3=A9**bec* *H3Z 1R7* *Tel: 514 907 5065 - Fax: 514 907 5067* *tt@homecareassistance.com * --001a1142c7129dbdde054aa29efe Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hello M=C3=A9lanie, Thank-you for the a= rticle.=C2=A0 I can imagine this is not easy to write. (hence why I'm w= riting you in English :). Feel free to respond in French) It=E2=80=99s obviously a complicated subject with technical terms t= hat are not familiar to most readers.=C2=A0 In fact, I found it difficult t= o understand myself and ended up referring to a government brochure to help= . All to say that I think the article needs to be = rewritten in a more simplified way in order to be understood and relevant t= o the reader.=C2=A0 If you look at the government brochure attached, I thin= k they are able to do this.=C2=A0 In fact, you could probably use it as a b= asis.=C2=A0 If you agree, would you be willing and have the time to rewrite= the article?=C2=A0 Alternately, I understand your on vacation so we could = attempt a rewrite based in the government brochure and have you approve it = upon your return. Please let me know=E2=80=A6thanks. -- Timothy Thomas Client Care Manager Home Car= e Assistance (Montr =C3=A9 <b style=3D