Re: CTM brochure

From
Timothy Thomas <tt@homecareassistance.com>
To
Alyssa Belcastro <abelcastro@homecareassistance.com>
Date
Wed, 21 Jan 2015 16
Folder
[Gmail]_Sent_Mail
--e89a8ffba975be95a5050d3048c6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Alyssa, Ok Understood, we'll do our best to limit them to one round. Here are the changes to the CTM brochure. 1. Please change all references to "Soins =C3=A0 domicile" in red (our comp= any name) to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" (Capitalize the D) 2. On the 2nd panel, update the header to La m=C3=A9thode de stimulation cognitive cible les cinq comp=C3=A9tences primaires du cerveau : 3. On the 2nd panel, update both the graphic and the header in the list below from "L'attention to "La Concentration" 4. Please add a comma where its highlighted: Le fonctionnement ex=C3=A9cuti= f inclut les facult=C3=A9s cognitives telles que le raisonnement, la r=C3=A9solution de probl=C3=A8mes, le jugement et la flexibilit=C3=A9 de la pens=C3=A9e. 5. On the 4th panel, 2nd paragraph, half way down it says "Soin =C3=A0 domicile", please correct to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" 6. On the 5th panel, last paragraph, please update to: Appelez-nous d=C3=A8= s aujourd=E2=80=99hui pour obtenir une consultation gratuite et d=C3=A9termin= er de quelle fa=C3=A7on nous pouvons aider votre famille de la meilleure fa=C3=A7on. 7. 6th panel, first paragraph, please update to: Pourquoi Soins =C3=A0 Domi= cile a-t-il innov=C3=A9 en d=C3=A9veloppant la m=C3=A9thode de stimulation cogni= tive? 8. 6th panel, 2nd paragraph, please update to: Soins =C3=A0 Domicile est le= chef de file en soins =C3=A0 domicile pour a=C3=AEn=C3=A9s depuis 2003. Notre mi= ssion consiste =C3=A0 changer la fa=C3=A7on dont nous vivons le vieillissement. C=E2=80=99= est dans cette optique que nous travaillons constamment =C3=A0 d=C3=A9velopper des program= mes innovateurs visant =C3=A0 am=C3=A9liorer la qualit=C3=A9 de vie des adultes= vieillissants. Les r=C3=A9sultats des plus r=C3=A9centes =C3=A9tudes sugg=C3=A8rent qu=E2= =80=99il existerait un lien entre la stimulation mentale et le ralentissement de la d=C3=A9t=C3=A9riora= tion des fonctions cognitives. Puisque nous voulons faire profiter =C3=A0 tous de ce= tte d=C3=A9couverte, nous avons d=C3=A9cid=C3=A9 de d=C3=A9velopper une m=C3=A9= thode pouvant =C3=AAtre appliqu=C3=A9e en priv=C3=A9, dans le confort de la demeure de votre proche= . Thanks! Timothy. On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 3:51 PM, Alyssa Belcastro wrote: > Hi Tim > > You will need to list them out or send the new translation. Our graphic > designer uses an old program not PhotoShop. Please keep in mind that as > with other marketing requests we are limiting edits to 2 runs so try to b= e > sure all changes are made this time around. > > Best, > > Alyssa > > On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 12:44 PM, Timothy Thomas tt@homecareassistance.com> wrote: > >> Hi Alyssa, >> >> I have a few small changes to the copy. As our translator has progressed >> they've decided to alter some terminology. Whats the best way to sent th= ese >> to you? If you could send me the layered document I can edit them myself= . >> >> Do 

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