--001a113a7c9a176fd0050d57331a Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Tim, Just a note that your changes did not include a space between "nous" and "voulons" originally. I will have our graphic designer make these changes and send you the high res draft as soon as possible. Best, Alyssa On Fri, Jan 23, 2015 at 7:50 AM, Timothy Thomas wrote: > Hi Alyssa, > > There's 2 small things. > > 1. On the 6th panel, 2nd paragraph, there is a space missing on the last > correction made: "nous voulons" > 2. On the 5th panel, last paragraph. Please change it to: "Appelez-nous > d=C3=A8s aujourd'hui pour obtenir une consultation gratuite et d=C3=A9ter= miner > commet nous pouvons aider votre famille." > > Thats it. You can send the high resolution copy afterwards. > > Thanks. > > On Thu, Jan 22, 2015 at 3:06 PM, Alyssa Belcastro abelcastro@homecareassistance.com> wrote: > >> Hi Tim >> >> The updated low res brochure is attached. Once approved I will send you >> the high res file. Same goes for the CTM materials I've shared thus far. >> >> Best, >> >> Alyssa >> >> On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 1:31 PM, Timothy Thomas > tt@homecareassistance.com> wrote: >> >>> Alyssa, >>> >>> Ok Understood, we'll do our best to limit them to one round. >>> >>> Here are the changes to the CTM brochure. >>> >>> 1. Please change all references to "Soins =C3=A0 domicile" in red (our >>> company name) to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" (Capitalize the D) >>> >>> 2. On the 2nd panel, update the header to La m=C3=A9thode de stimulatio= n >>> cognitive cible les cinq comp=C3=A9tences primaires du cerveau : >>> >>> 3. On the 2nd panel, update both the graphic and the header in the list >>> below from "L'attention to "La Concentration" >>> >>> 4. Please add a comma where its highlighted: Le fonctionnement ex=C3=A9= cutif >>> inclut les facult=C3=A9s cognitives telles que le raisonnement, la r=C3= =A9solution de probl=C3=A8mes, >>> le jugement et la flexibilit=C3=A9 de la pens=C3=A9e. >>> >>> 5. On the 4th panel, 2nd paragraph, half way down it says "Soin =C3=A0 >>> domicile", please correct to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" >>> >>> 6. On the 5th panel, last paragraph, please update to: Appelez-nous d= =C3=A8s >>> aujourd=E2=80=99hui pour obtenir une consultation gratuite et d=C3=A9te= rminer de quelle >>> fa=C3=A7on nous pouvons aider votre famille de la meilleure fa=C3=A7on. >>> >>> 7. 6th panel, first paragraph, please update to: Pourquoi Soins =C3=A0 >>> Domicile a-t-il innov=C3=A9 en d=C3=A9veloppant la m=C3=A9thode de stim= ulation >>> cognitive? >>> >>> 8. 6th panel, 2nd paragraph, please update to: Soins =C3=A0 Domicile es= t le >>> chef de file en soins =C3=A0 domicile pour a=C3=AEn=C3=A9s depuis 2003.= Notre mission >>> consiste =C3=A0 changer la fa=C3=A7on dont nous vivons le vieillissemen= t. C=E2=80=99est dans >>> cette optique que nous travaillons constamment =C3=A0 d=C3=A9velopper d= es programmes >>> innovateurs visant =C3=A0 am=C3=A9liorer la qual