--f46d04190ef4038901050d53c0e1 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Alyssa, There's 2 small things. 1. On the 6th panel, 2nd paragraph, there is a space missing on the last correction made: "nous voulons" 2. On the 5th panel, last paragraph. Please change it to: "Appelez-nous d= =C3=A8s aujourd'hui pour obtenir une consultation gratuite et d=C3=A9terminer comme= t nous pouvons aider votre famille." Thats it. You can send the high resolution copy afterwards. Thanks. On Thu, Jan 22, 2015 at 3:06 PM, Alyssa Belcastro wrote: > Hi Tim > > The updated low res brochure is attached. Once approved I will send you > the high res file. Same goes for the CTM materials I've shared thus far. > > Best, > > Alyssa > > On Wed, Jan 21, 2015 at 1:31 PM, Timothy Thomas > wrote: > >> Alyssa, >> >> Ok Understood, we'll do our best to limit them to one round. >> >> Here are the changes to the CTM brochure. >> >> 1. Please change all references to "Soins =C3=A0 domicile" in red (our c= ompany >> name) to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" (Capitalize the D) >> >> 2. On the 2nd panel, update the header to La m=C3=A9thode de stimulation >> cognitive cible les cinq comp=C3=A9tences primaires du cerveau : >> >> 3. On the 2nd panel, update both the graphic and the header in the list >> below from "L'attention to "La Concentration" >> >> 4. Please add a comma where its highlighted: Le fonctionnement ex=C3=A9c= utif >> inclut les facult=C3=A9s cognitives telles que le raisonnement, la r=C3= =A9solution de probl=C3=A8mes, >> le jugement et la flexibilit=C3=A9 de la pens=C3=A9e. >> >> 5. On the 4th panel, 2nd paragraph, half way down it says "Soin =C3=A0 >> domicile", please correct to "Soins =C3=A0 Domicile" >> >> 6. On the 5th panel, last paragraph, please update to: Appelez-nous d=C3= =A8s >> aujourd=E2=80=99hui pour obtenir une consultation gratuite et d=C3=A9ter= miner de quelle >> fa=C3=A7on nous pouvons aider votre famille de la meilleure fa=C3=A7on. >> >> 7. 6th panel, first paragraph, please update to: Pourquoi Soins =C3=A0 >> Domicile a-t-il innov=C3=A9 en d=C3=A9veloppant la m=C3=A9thode de stimu= lation >> cognitive? >> >> 8. 6th panel, 2nd paragraph, please update to: Soins =C3=A0 Domicile est= le >> chef de file en soins =C3=A0 domicile pour a=C3=AEn=C3=A9s depuis 2003. = Notre mission >> consiste =C3=A0 changer la fa=C3=A7on dont nous vivons le vieillissement= . C=E2=80=99est dans >> cette optique que nous travaillons constamment =C3=A0 d=C3=A9velopper de= s programmes >> innovateurs visant =C3=A0 am=C3=A9liorer la qualit=C3=A9 de vie des adul= tes vieillissants. >> Les r=C3=A9sultats des plus r=C3=A9centes =C3=A9tudes sugg=C3=A8rent qu= =E2=80=99il existerait un lien >> entre la stimulation mentale et le ralentissement de la d=C3=A9t=C3=A9ri= oration des >> fonctions cognitives. Puisque nous voulons faire profiter =C3=A0 tous de >> cette d=C3=A9couverte, nous avons d=C3=A9cid=C3=A9 de d=C3=A9velopper un= e m=C3=A9thode pouva