Re: New Draft - Montreal Mailer

From
Joey Taylor <joey.taylor@thekey.com>
To
Katy Kessler <katy.kessler@thekey.com>
CC
Timothy Thomas <tt@thekey.com>, Emma Zumsen <emma.zumsen@thekey.com>, Greg Jones <greg.jones@thekey.com>
Date
Thu, 30 Jan 2025 18:11:00 -0500
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--000000000000a927fd062cf48abb Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I love it!!! Thank you so much Katy!! On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 6:09=E2=80=AFPM Katy Kessler wrote: > One more pass with new edits. Let me know if these fit the bill, @Joey > Taylor > Katy > > On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 3:47=E2=80=AFPM Joey Taylor > wrote: > >> Good Afternoon Katy, >> >> Thank you very much for making these changes so quickly. I looked it ove= r >> with some of our CSMs and would like to make a few more changes before >> sending it to legal. >> *Side 1* >> 1. Change "Personalized care and advanced safety" to "Personalized and >> trusted care" >> 2. "Choose Your Caregiver: Hire from our team of professional and >> trained caregivers for your peace of mind" >> 3. Add: Can we add something here about having background checks done >> (Vetted) as well bonded >> 4. Remove: "Monitoring and Reporting: Lifeguard focuses on proactive and >> preventive measures to address potential health issues before they escal= ate" >> >> >> *Side 2*1. "If you or your loved one are not ready for home care, the >> Lifeguard Pro smart sensor technology can keep you safe in the event of = a >> fall. Lifeguard nurses have real-time access to subtle changes in >> well-being, providing an opportunity to address concerns at any time of = the >> day or night for $499 per month." >> 2. "Well-Check Visits: Monthly in-home visits and weekly wellness report= s >> from our certified nurses" >> >> After these changes, I am happy and excited to roll this out. @Timothy >> Thomas Can you send your final approval as well >> >> Thanks, >> >> >> On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 4:32=E2=80=AFPM Katy Kessler >> wrote: >> >>> Hi Folks, >>> Per my conversation with Tim and Joey, I made a quick new draft, >>> attached here. If you're ready to. move forward with these changes, I'l= l >>> still need to send it to Kay for final formatting review and Legal. Let= me >>> know your thoughts! >>> Katy >>> >>> >>> -- >>> >>> Katy Kessler >>> >>> Marketing Coordinator >>> >>> katy.kessler@thekey.com | 952-239-5430 | TheKey.com >>> >>> >>> >>> >> >> -- >> >> Joey Taylor >> >> *Directeur G=C3=A9n=C3=A9ral/**General Manager* >> >> 514-907-5065 >> >> TheKey.ca >> >> [image: TheKey] >> > > > -- > > Katy Kessler > > Marketing Coordinator > > katy.kessler@thekey.com | 952-239-5430 | TheKey.com > > > > --=20 Joey Taylor *Directeur G=C3=A9n=C3=A9ral/**General Manager* 514-907-5065 TheKey.ca [image: TheKey] --000000000000a927fd062cf48abb Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I love it!!! Thank you so much Katy!!=C2=A0 On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 6:09=E2=80=AFPM Katy Kessler &lt; katy.kessler@thekey.com &gt; wrote: One more pass with new edits. Let me=C2=A0know if these fit the bill,=C2= =A0 @Joey Taylor = =C2=A0 Katy On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 3:47=E2=80=AFPM Joey Taylor &l= t; joey.taylor@t= hekey.com &gt; wrote: Good Afternoon Katy, Thank you very much= fo

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