--0000000000004d7529062cf48370 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="0000000000004d7527062cf4836e" --0000000000004d7527062cf4836e Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable One more pass with new edits. Let me know if these fit the bill, @Joey Taylor Katy On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 3:47=E2=80=AFPM Joey Taylor wrote: > Good Afternoon Katy, > > Thank you very much for making these changes so quickly. I looked it over > with some of our CSMs and would like to make a few more changes before > sending it to legal. > *Side 1* > 1. Change "Personalized care and advanced safety" to "Personalized and > trusted care" > 2. "Choose Your Caregiver: Hire from our team of professional and traine= d > caregivers for your peace of mind" > 3. Add: Can we add something here about having background checks done > (Vetted) as well bonded > 4. Remove: "Monitoring and Reporting: Lifeguard focuses on proactive and > preventive measures to address potential health issues before they escala= te" > > > *Side 2*1. "If you or your loved one are not ready for home care, the > Lifeguard Pro smart sensor technology can keep you safe in the event of a > fall. Lifeguard nurses have real-time access to subtle changes in > well-being, providing an opportunity to address concerns at any time of t= he > day or night for $499 per month." > 2. "Well-Check Visits: Monthly in-home visits and weekly wellness reports > from our certified nurses" > > After these changes, I am happy and excited to roll this out. @Timothy > Thomas Can you send your final approval as well > > Thanks, > > > On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 4:32=E2=80=AFPM Katy Kessler > wrote: > >> Hi Folks, >> Per my conversation with Tim and Joey, I made a quick new draft, attache= d >> here. If you're ready to. move forward with these changes, I'll still ne= ed >> to send it to Kay for final formatting review and Legal. Let me know you= r >> thoughts! >> Katy >> >> >> -- >> >> Katy Kessler >> >> Marketing Coordinator >> >> katy.kessler@thekey.com | 952-239-5430 | TheKey.com >> >> >> >> > > -- > > Joey Taylor > > *Directeur G=C3=A9n=C3=A9ral/**General Manager* > > 514-907-5065 > > TheKey.ca > > [image: TheKey] > --=20 Katy Kessler Marketing Coordinator katy.kessler@thekey.com | 952-239-5430 | TheKey.com --0000000000004d7527062cf4836e Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable One more pass with new edits. Let me=C2=A0know if these fi= t the bill,=C2=A0 @Joey Taylor =C2=A0 Katy On Thu, Jan 30, 2025 at 3:47=E2=80=AFPM = Joey Taylor < joey.taylor@theke= y.com > wrote: Good Afternoon Katy, Thank you very much for m= aking these changes so quickly. I looked it over with some of our CSMs and = would like to make a few more changes before sending it to legal. Sid= e 1 1. Change "Personalized care and advanced safety" to &= quot;Personalized and trusted care" 2.=C2=A0 "Choose Your Care= giver: Hire from our team of professional