--000000000000c99dc20609aae298 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Yep, waiting on the # and URL. I will take a stab at design for now! Thank you! On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:33=E2=80=AFPM Chuck Terlesky wrote: > I think the edits you made are perfect. I would just adjust the statement > in the last line. > > On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 2:17=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen = wrote: > >> I made a bunch of edits. Can you please take a look and let me know if >> you think I cut anything too essential. Please note that a lot of this >> detail will be included on the landing page. >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bdop24rs-ZZOUU4ulGf1Z= 3vZYpWg/edit >> >> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:11=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen = wrote: >> >>> Okay let's try it! And if we get traction, we can think about other >>> versions. >>> >>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:07=E2=80=AFPM Chuck Terlesky >>> wrote: >>> >>>> The cost of delivering a postcard to me makes more sense. Once we go >>>> over the postcard size, it gets much more expensive. I like the idea, = so >>>> I'm hopeful the postcard will bring in some extra clients to justify a >>>> bigger budget=E2=80=94just my two cents. >>>> >>>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:57=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen wrote: >>>> >>>>> Question. As I am in here editing, do you think a postcard makes sens= e >>>>> - or a more formal form letter? We don't want to do anything fishy, b= ut I >>>>> wonder if a letter will allow us to put more detail, but also give th= e >>>>> impression we are more of an official solution. What do you think? >>>>> >>>>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 10:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Sounds good, thank you. >>>>>> >>>>>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 12:59=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> This is really good and I have a few suggestions. This copy is >>>>>>> probably better suited for the landing page, as it's simply TOO muc= h for a >>>>>>> direct mail piece. Let take a stab and get back to you guys. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Tue, Nov 7, 2023 at 8:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Hi Megan, >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Chuck and I polished the direct mail piece copy, take a look >>>>>>>> and let me know what you think - >>>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bdop24rs-ZZOUU4= ulGf1Z3vZYpWg/edit?usp=3Dsharing >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> -- >>>>>>>> Tim Thomas >>>>>>>> Head of Canada Division >>>>>>>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>>>>>>> tt@TheKey.com >>>>>>>> (514) 591-9387 >>>>>>>> TheKey.ca >>>>>>>> [image: TheKey] >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> -- >>>>>> Tim Thomas >>>>>> Head of Canada Division >>>>>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>>>>> tt@TheKey.com >>>>>> (514) 591-9387 >>>>>> TheKey.ca >>>>>> [image: TheKey] >>>>>> >>>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Chuck Terlesky B.A., CCPE >>>> General Manager/Regional Caregiver Ambassador for Canada >>>> >>>> 403-301-3777 >>>> >>>> TheKey.ca >>>> >>>> [image: TheKey]