--0000000000000cd8030609aad87a Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I think the edits you made are perfect. I would just adjust the statement in the last line. On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 2:17=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen wr= ote: > I made a bunch of edits. Can you please take a look and let me know if yo= u > think I cut anything too essential. Please note that a lot of this detail > will be included on the landing page. > > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bdop24rs-ZZOUU4ulGf1Z3= vZYpWg/edit > > On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:11=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen = wrote: > >> Okay let's try it! And if we get traction, we can think about other >> versions. >> >> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:07=E2=80=AFPM Chuck Terlesky >> wrote: >> >>> The cost of delivering a postcard to me makes more sense. Once we go >>> over the postcard size, it gets much more expensive. I like the idea, s= o >>> I'm hopeful the postcard will bring in some extra clients to justify a >>> bigger budget=E2=80=94just my two cents. >>> >>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 1:57=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen wrote: >>> >>>> Question. As I am in here editing, do you think a postcard makes sense >>>> - or a more formal form letter? We don't want to do anything fishy, bu= t I >>>> wonder if a letter will allow us to put more detail, but also give the >>>> impression we are more of an official solution. What do you think? >>>> >>>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 10:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas = wrote: >>>> >>>>> Sounds good, thank you. >>>>> >>>>> On Wed, Nov 8, 2023 at 12:59=E2=80=AFPM Megan Heinen >>>>> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> This is really good and I have a few suggestions. This copy is >>>>>> probably better suited for the landing page, as it's simply TOO much= for a >>>>>> direct mail piece. Let take a stab and get back to you guys. >>>>>> >>>>>> On Tue, Nov 7, 2023 at 8:36=E2=80=AFAM Timothy Thomas wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Megan, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Chuck and I polished the direct mail piece copy, take a look and le= t >>>>>>> me know what you think - >>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fnMYVDQfo5cdYs8bdop24rs-ZZOUU4u= lGf1Z3vZYpWg/edit?usp=3Dsharing >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> -- >>>>>>> Tim Thomas >>>>>>> Head of Canada Division >>>>>>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>>>>>> tt@TheKey.com >>>>>>> (514) 591-9387 >>>>>>> TheKey.ca >>>>>>> [image: TheKey] >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> Tim Thomas >>>>> Head of Canada Division >>>>> *Please note my email has changed:* >>>>> tt@TheKey.com >>>>> (514) 591-9387 >>>>> TheKey.ca >>>>> [image: TheKey] >>>>> >>>> >>> >>> -- >>> Chuck Terlesky B.A., CCPE >>> General Manager/Regional Caregiver Ambassador for Canada >>> >>> 403-301-3777 >>> >>> TheKey.ca >>> >>> [image: TheKey] >>> >>> --=20 Chuck Terlesky B.A., CCPE General Manager/Regional Caregiver Ambassador for Canada 403-301-3777 TheKey.ca [image: TheKey] --0000000000000cd8030609aad87a Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Enc